Wednesday, October 8, 2008

PoEm =P


BEOWULF IS A BRAVE, BETTER AND POWERFUL WARRIOR OF THE GEATS.
HE IS KNOWN FOR HIS BRAVERY AND HIS ALMOST SUPERHUMAN DEEDS AT STRENGTH.
WHEN HE HEARS THAT THE NEIGHBORING KING OF THE DANES AND HIS MEN ARE BEING TERRORIZED BY A VICIOUS MONSTER, THE GREAT GEAT WARRIOR TAKES UP THE CHALLENGE.
THEY HAVE SEEN MY STRENGTH FOR THEMSELVES, HAVE SEEN MY RISE FROM THE DARKNESS OF WAR, DRIPPING WITH MY ENEMIES' BLOOD.
I DROVE FIVE GREAT GIANTS INTO CHAINS, CHASED ALL OF THAT RACE FROM THE EARTH.
NOW GRENDEL AND I ARE CALLED TOGETHER, AND NOW I'VE COME.
........
MY HANDS ALONE SHALL FIGHT FOR ME.

7 comments:

Jesus said...

Nice strong words that you used I like it. How have you done it? It is very interesting and a very high qualification. hope that you have a dicent grade

joel said...

ooh snaps i like how u used like very strong words to descrive beowulf. i also like how u put it together 2 make it sound aigh..kep it upz

Jessica A. said...

hey gio i like your poem!
u use the allitaration and your poem made sense!
it was intresting

AnMgarcia said...

HEY GIOVIz I LIKE HOW U USE REALLY STRONG ADJECTIVES TO DESCRIBE BEOWULF..LIKE..BRAVE,BETTER N POWERFUL..ITS WAS FUN READING CAUSE IT HAD ACTION..LOVE U GIRLIE

CAR0LINA`S PRiNC3SS W0RLD said...

H3Y Gi0ViS! i L0V3 UR P03M U DiD A R3ALLY G00D J0B! iS N0TiC3ABL3 THAT U PUT A L0T 0F 3FF0RT iN iT. iT R3ALLY T3LLS THAT B30WULF iS A BRAVE MAN.
L0V3 U
-CHAPARRiTA-

Miss Diaz said...

Giovanna, don't worry about that song. Adding it here was optional. I wanted a hard copy of it.

Question: Why did you include that long link after your poem. Please edit this and remove it.

Let me know if you have any questions.

♥ 3L!Z@B3Th ♥ said...

I liked your peom you had really good words and strong frases. It descrive how Beowulf is so great and powerfull. But nice job...you snap!!